THE WRITE ZONE: The Visions Are Back

Coming Soon: CAGED

THE WRITE ZONE: “The Murdered Will Haunt His Murderer.”

Carolina Starr will once again be forced to acknowledge her gifts in CAGED, to be released in 2015 as a Bongo Bay Mystery Novella. This is the sequel to Stolen Destiny.

Although the main story revolves around Marla Mooreland and Royce Sloan, Carolina will play a significant role in helping solve a man’s murder. There are twists and turns you will enjoy and one of them will be an angry ghost who will help….No!  You’ll have to read the book to find out.

Ghost stories have tingled our spines since childhood, and now paranormal activities have piqued the interest of cities in across the county, (including Tampa and Ybor City) by offering ghost tours to the tourists who visit their fair cities.

I remember some of my friends sneaking out and going to graveyards or funeral parlors to witness possible sightings. No, I didn’t go with them, but neither did they go with me last year to visit a haunted jail.

For those of you who aren’t aware of it, there are SIGNS to look for if a spirit is trying to communicate to you:

1. You get a sudden feeling you’re being watched or you’re not alone in a room. If you do, you may be tapping into an energy field

2. A sudden drop in temperature with no logical explanation.

3. A cold spot in a room that isn’t near a window or door.

4. The hairs on the back of your neck seem to stand on end.

5. Goosebumps break out on your arms for no reason.

6. Light bulbs blow out often or flicker on and off on their own. (I’ve experienced this one first hand).

7. Electrical stuff goes haywire.

8. Your dog follows something around the house you can’t see.

9. Your cat scatters for cover or hisses at nothing.

10. You hear a knock or several knocks but when you go to the door, no one is there.

11. You hear the spirit call your name.

12. A sudden familiar scent will fill the room.

Do you believe in such things?  Have you ever seen a ghost or perhaps heard one? It would certainly make your life a little more interesting.

I would welcome some of your ghost stories, so please share.

Until next time, Stay in The Write Zone.

Jeanette

 

 

 

 

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THE WRITE ZONE: The Dangers of On-Line Dating

COMING SOON: The release of A Bongo Bay Mystery Novella: “CAGED”!

If you read my first Bongo Bay Mystery, Stolen Destiny, you will remember Carolina Starr’s promise to investigate the disappearance of Tampa Native, Ramona Dominguez.

In “Caged” readers will finally discover what happened to her. Please be aware that this is Adult Content. My research of “human sex trafficking” has been a long and depressing process because although my story is fictional, it is a harsh realization that these things actually do happen. Traffickers can be your neighbor next door or your family dentist.

Despite all of this, “Caged” is also a Mystery/ Romance and Bongo Bay will have some new residents that you will love. I will introduce you to some of them in a later blog.

For now, this blog will concentrate on another scenario. .

If you’re single, widowed, or divorced you can be scammed with #on-line #romance. Your age doesn’t matter. Although I am addressing this to women, men can be scammed too.

Who hasn’t at one time or another dreamed of finding a soul mate? A man who encompasses everything you’ve ever wanted? A man who listens to your desires? One who is not only romantic but one who has a compassionate heart? Someone who is successful and intelligent who will offer you devotion, loyalty and companionship?

There are hundreds of thousands of both men and women who are desperately seeking relationships.

Perhaps it’s because you’ve lost a spouse, either through death or divorce; It could even be because you’ve had so many disappointments in love that you want and need Love more than anything else in the world..

Then you find him. You see an ad and you contact him first. He’s the answer to your prayers.

These men/women are not REAL. Scammers often use images of models, actors, or fake documentations to prove a false identity if you question them.

They are experts at finding out everything about you. How? Because you are more than willing to share intimate details about your life. It’s the first time anyone’s cared about all you’ve been through in your life. And he’s Listening to all the past disappointments you’ve had and he promises he will make it all up to you. You deserve better.

Then his mission and campaign begins. He remembers your favorite flower is a rare orchid and he sends you a bouquet. He’ll send you chocolates; he doesn’t care if you’re overweight. He loves you for the person you are inside. He will play on your emotions. He may tell you he will build you your dream house on the beach and will take care of you. You no longer have to work so that you can travel all over the world together.  He’s so smooth and convincing he should win an Academy Award for his acting abilities.The Entrapment he has planned for you is in place.

And they take all these little details and he creates the person you’ve been waiting for all of your life. Just like I invent my heroines/ heroes, he takes over the script and feeds your soul with words of love and compliments. He’s a genius; he’s a poet; he’s a CON. As an author, I would call him my Villain.

You get sucked in to his game. Why? It’s not because you’re stupid. You are VULNERABLE..

So this blog is about helping women who have either already been scammed or to those who may be tempted to go on-line to meet the love of your life.

No, the man you’re having an on-line relationship with right now  IS NOT DIFFERENT. Sometimes even the paid sites are filled with scammers. BEWARE.

Forget the movie, “You’ve Got Mail!”  You are not communicating with Tom Hanks and you’re not Meg Ryan.

Learn from other people’s horrible experiences and don’t think it can’t happen to you.

1 .Research and investigate. Don’t rely on the site to protect you.

2. Do not share any personal information such as your address,  date of birth or information about your personal finances or assets.

3. Do not give him your personal e-mail address.

4. NEVER SEND MONEY OR ALLOW HIM TO SEND OR FAX YOU CHECKS TO DEPOSIT FOR THEM IN THIS COUNTRY.

5. Meet them in person in a public place. Make sure you’re not followed home after the “date.” If they give you an excuse why he can’t meet you or a tale of an unexpected emergency, walk away and never look back.

6. Do not be ashamed to REPORT it if you have encountered a scammer or if you suspect you’ve been victimized.  Report it to the dating service and to the FBI’s Internet Crime Complaint Center at IC3.gov.

7. Know that you will go through a Grieving process. A period of depression will envelop you like a dark cloak because this has hit you harder than you could have ever imagined. As hard as it may be for other people to understand, you fell in love with a myth. Search for Support Groups because you are not the only one who has been scammed. TAKE THE CLOAK OFF AND THROW IT AWAY.

8. Join a church; the Moose Club; the Elks Club; Italian Club, etc., to meet new friends.Both men and women.  If you meet people in places like this, other members will be able to vouch for his character, or will know if he’s married or divorced; They will have heard rumors if he has gambling habits or drug and alcohol addictions.

Nothing is a guarantee. But there are other options out there. You don’t have to feel lonely. Go out with your friends..Get involved in organizations that help other people. Take up a hobby. Be Constructive, Not Destructive.

I sincerely hope and pray that this information will help somebody out there. Please share if you have single friends.

May God Bless and Protect You.

Until next time,
Stay In The Write Zone

Jeanette Lynn Dundas

 

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THE WRITE ZONE: “You Have to Kill Your Darlings.” – Stephen King

Stephen King is one of the best story tellers in this Century. Although I’m not into chilling horrors, he has mastered the art of writing.

In my debut novel, Stolen Destiny, I touched on the subject of death when I introduced Dawn Flemming and her husband, Vince Garrett. The reader immediately knew they had been murdered; Wade Peterson’s brother, James, committed suicide.

I’ve read books where the author kills one or more main characters. I get furious! Why? Because I have gotten emotionally attached to them.. No matter how dire the situation appears, I expect the miracle of a ‘SAVE’.

Now I’m wondering if I should limit myself like that. Unfortunately, death is a part of life, right?

Until now, I couldn’t fathom killing any of my characters off.  Most of us have already experienced the journey of grief and pain in losing someone we love. Why would I want to subject my reader to that pain and heartache? Because it makes the story and the characters real. If you think it’s easy for a fictional character to die, remember Message In A Bottle or A Walk To Remember?  I consider  Nicholas Sparks a genius in writing unforgettable romances; sometimes tragic; sometimes bittersweet. Maybe he got Stephen King’s message, because he definitely kills his darlings too.

Losing someone to  murder isn’t as common, but it does happen, especially  if you listen to  the nightly  news. It happens in the best of families and doesn’t discriminate from the rich or poor.  I sometimes wonder if I’m being insensitive to the reader who has lost someone to crime. It’s not something I consciously think about when I create a scene. Sometimes bad things happen to good people.

As a writer of romance and mysteries, I will, when the story permits,  “kill my darlings”.  I will test the waters and see if Stephen King is right about his advice.  I hope all of you readers will let me know what you think.

So be prepared for a few surprises in the next series of my Bongo Bay Mysteries.

Until next time, Stay In The Write Zone,

Jeanette Lynn Dundas

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THE WRITE ZONE: Utopia in Bongo Bay Beach

Last week as we  honored Martin Luther King, I remembered some things in my childhood that I  didn’t understand at the time.

African Americans were not called ‘Blacks’. Sometimes they were called ‘Negroes’, and we all know how sometimes people weren’t kind and used the N Word. Sadly, even today, I hear it. I will never understand that kind of cruelty.

Public water fountains were separated by signs: White/Colored. The same with public restrooms. I never questioned it until I was sitting at a counter at Kress’s in downtown Tampa. They had counters for the Whites and one for the Coloreds. That particular day, a black woman holding her daughter’s hand passed by as I was sitting at the counter, eating an ice cream cone. The little girl told her mother she wanted an ice cream and her mother said: “We can’t sit with the whites and the colored counter is closed.” I turned to my mother and asked why that little girl couldn’t sit with us.As I watched that little girl leave with tears in her eyes,  I remember that ice cream cone didn’t taste good anymore.

We were Catholic and attended Sacred Heart Church in Tampa. I remember sitting on a bus bench waiting for my mother to come out after mass. A black woman was seated there and I sat beside her, gave her a smile, and said, “Hello.” She asked me if I was a member of the church. I merely nodded and what she said shocked and disillusioned me.

     “I wanted to go to your church to attend mass, but the priest told me I couldn’t go in the front door and would have to enter through the side door. I also have to sit in the back of the bus.”

I told her I couldn’t imagine a priest doing that. He was a role model; a priest who taught Christianity; one who preached that all men were created equal in the eyes of God. As far as the bus rules, I never paid that much attention or gave it any thought. I always believed it was where they preferred to sit.

When the civil rights movement began in the sixties,  Martin Luther King was a man I admired. He advocated PEACE.  Not to say that riots didn’t happen back then, but those who believed in the movement had faith that we could change the world and make it a better place for everyone.  I was so idealistic. Even though things have gotten better, I was hoping that by now, we wouldn’t have some of the same issues. I wonder if King were still alive, if some of the recent rioting could have been prevented. In my opinion the black leaders now aren’t worthy of followers. Violence can never be the answer to anything. If changes have to be made, there has to be a better and smarter way in which to do it.  Violence doesn’t solve anything; it merely alienates one against the other and destroys the purpose. Again, just my opinion.

As a writer, I want to address conflict; give my characters depth and substance. With my debut novel, Stolen Destiny, I introduced Bongo Bay Beach, but so far the residents have all been white. I have made a decision to create one or more characters of different races, cultures and religions in the near future. Bongo Bay is supposed to be a paradise; a heaven on earth. God doesn’t discriminate and neither will I.

Until next time, stay in The Write Zone.

Jeanette Lynn Dundas

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THE WRITE ZONE: Procrastination Queen

January is the time for New Resolutions and of course I have my list:

1. Blog more on my website.

2. Keep up with my Social Media Accounts and use my Author Facebook Page.

3. Learn More about my Craft and Share.

4. Write diligently everyday on my Work In Progress (CAGED).

5. Deliver my best book in my 2nd Series of my Bongo Bay Mysteries.

It sounds simple, but I’ve told myself most of my life that I am disorganized and the queen of procrastination.  By affirming these statements, others in my life have affirmed it too. The end result is: I became what I believed. I can’t believe I did that to myself, knowing what I think, I am; What I believe about myself, will be.

If I’ve learned anything in 2014 it is to believe in myself.

Once I did that, others started believing in me too.  Things started to happen and my first novel, Stolen Destiny, was published and available on Amazon in July.  In October, I had a successful book launch and since then, I’ve heard great reviews.

So now I welcome 2015 with open arms.  I have control to make it a productive year and to get rid of old habits and negative thoughts.

All of us have the same number of hours in a day and no matter how much time you’ve wasted in the past, you still have an entire tomorrow.

Begin now to affirm your goals.

Don’t be afraid.

Believe in yourself and never give up your dream.

You can make it happen.

So, join me my friends and fellow writers by making your tomorrow begin NOW.

Until then, Stay in The Write Zone

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THE WRITE ZONE: A Paranormal Adventure

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HAMILTON COUNTY’S OLD JAIL IN JASPER FLORIDA

Over a month ago, in an attempt to do as much research as possible in the paranormal field, I spent a weekend in Jail. Luckily I did not have to spend the night there. But believe it or not, some of the paranormal Investigators, did indeed spend the night hoping to connect with old spirits still haunting the jail. The next morning at breakfast, their escapades were shared with the rest of the group. Some heard jail doors banging in the middle of the night and one of the girls thought she saw translucent shadows moving throughout the building.

You may laugh or shake your head in disbelief, but many people experience this phenomenon first hand. They claim they can connect with a spirit who either just hangs around in limbo ( I would think that to be a hell in itself). Some can be in transition, or still be in a coma.

One of the psychics at this fund raising event, to restore the historical jail, is a forensic medium who has been utilized by the police when they have a suspect, but can’t find the body. She is able to communicate with that spirit, so that the body can be found to obtain more evidence.

On this adventurous evening, that same medium  was able to connect to a male spirit who was jailed as early as the early 1900′s. He was sentenced to life for murder, but claimed it had been in self-defense. When the medium asked him why he didn’t move on; or why he chose to stay incarcerated in his cell, he explained that he was afraid. He didn’t know what would be waiting for him on the other side. His fear kept him there. Some spirits have unfinished business. They may want revenge or may want justice. I was told that most are harmless, friendly, and like to play practical jokes.  Some have a powerful energy and can be dangerous. This is not an avenue I would want to pursue.

In Stolen Destiny, Dawn Flemming chose to stay in this kind of limbo in order to protect her daughter, Carolina Starr. from a murderer.  Dawn also wanted justice. My story is totally fictional, but research was needed to make it as authentic as possible to those who have experienced these kind of things.

For those of you who really don’t believe any of this, I will honestly tell you that I have had a personal experience of a similar nature. It’s where a spirit will contact you through your senses. Of course I didn’t know this at the time, but soon after my Nanna passed away, I was driving my car and all of a sudden I smelled her powder. She loved Cody. The scent was coming from the back seat. I didn’t think much about it, but it brought a smile to my face and somehow I did feel her presence.

Years later, in 2005, my beloved mother was in Hospice. I remember sharing shifts with my children. I wasn’t supposed to go back until around 4PM that day. I was supposed to rest and sleep in. Of course, I couldn’t. I went in and took a shower and when I got out, the entire bathroom smelled like my mother’s perfume. I smelled the towels, thinking that was where the scent was coming from and there was nothing on them. I smelled my own skin and smelled the soap, but the entire room was engulfed with her essence. I started weeping, knowing she was there to say good-bye. She came to me subtly, without any threat, so I had no fear. That same year, while in Mexico, I heard my mother’s voice. No, I swear I am not crazy.

So if you think Stolen Destiny is a little too far out for your taste, know in your heart, that I am sincere in my writing. I love creating a little bit of truth with a little bit of fiction in my stories. I think it makes each of my characters interesting and unique. I hope you will find Stolen Destiny enchanting.

Until next time, Stay in The Write Zone.

 

 

Interior Jail Cell  As a female, I would be mortified not having any privacy.

 

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T HE WRITE ZONE: Meet Wade Peterson In Stolen Destiny

Wade Peterson is living every man’s dream in an upscale Manhattan apartment and dating a beautiful International model. His success as a non-fiction author has zoomed him into a jet set circle with the rich and famous. Then a phone call threatens to destroy everything he’s done to build a new life for himself.

His father is ill and needs him to return to Florida and salvage his small town newspaper.

What would you do if you were faced with this situation?

Whether you are a male or female, I’m sure most of us have at one time or another, sought approval from our fathers. But what if your father never praised you? What if, whatever you did, wasn’t good enough? What if you never felt loved? Would you feel justified in refusing to help him?

His father’s plea for help has opened a well of deep resentments that he thought he’d buried a long time ago.

These are the questions I asked myself when I created Wade’s character. When should we draw the line and think only of ourselves?

I hope when you read Stolen Destiny that you will be able to identify with his inner battles and admire his strength when faced with a difficult decision.

And maybe we’ll discover that sometimes, we need to go back in order for us to move forward.

Happy Reading,
Jeanette

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The Write Zone: Stolen Destiny

whiskey  AN INTRODUCTION TO CAROLINA STARR

My first novel, Stolen Destiny, will soon be released this spring. It’s a mystery, with a paranormal twist and also a sweet romance. That’s the simple definition.

There are a lot of layers in this story with a complex character who experienced a childhood trauma and domestic violence from an alcoholic father.

#Domestic #violence is the use of physical, sexual, threatening or emotional force to frighten, intimidate and control. This type of abuse usually escalates and becomes worse with time.

WHY DID I WRITE ABOUT THIS?

When I was 14 years old, I had a friend who lived with her grandmother and her uncle. The uncle owned the house where they lived and they were totally dependent on him for the roof over their heads.

We’ll call this friend, Fran. Fran’s mother would give sexual favors in return for money. So her grandmother’s house was supposed to be her safe haven. But in reality, her uncle, when he became intoxicated, would sexually abuse her. Often, to escape his advances, she’d sleep out on the porch with a blanket wrapped around her. Finally, when it became intolerable, she confided her secret to her grandmother.

Fran got a hard slap in the face. “Don’t ever open your mouth about this. If anyone believes your lies, we’ll be living on the street.”

It wasn’t until we were adults that Fran confided in me. This horrifying experience, affected her self-esteem, even though she had done nothing wrong and none of it was her fault.

This abuse describes what happened to Fran; not who she was. She may have been a victim, but she was far from weak. Fran survived and became a stronger person, just like the character I created in Carolina Starr.

This novel is dedicated to women who have suffered abuse. It was through hours of research that I became aware of the horrible statistics.

1 in four women will experience domestic violence in their lifetime.

1.3 million Women are survivors of domestic violence each year.

85% of domestic violence survivors are women.

Sexual assault or forced sex occurs in approximately 40-45% of abusive relationships.

There are options available to these women. If you or anyone you know is in an abusive situation, please contact, Women Helping Women on their 24 hour crisis line: 513-381-5610 or Toll Free: 1-877-889-5610. Women Helping Women works with thousands of community members and professionals every year to educate and prevent domestic violence. For more information go to: www.womenhelpingwomen.org.

And if you like Stolen Destiny, please look for the sequel, presently in progress, where women are abducted and sold to a human trafficking sex ring located in Florida. It will take Carolina Starr’s investigative skills and her psychic visions to save her best friend Marla Mooreland from the hands of a sexual monster. Although this is a novel of fiction, my research indicates that Florida is the 3rd largest city in human sex trafficking. Kind of scary, isn’t it?

Until we meet again, stay in THE WRITE ZONE.

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THE WRITE ZONE: Dylan Thomas

A good poem is a contribution to reality. The world is never the same once a good poem has been added to it. A good poem helps to change the shape of the universe, helps to extend everyone’s knowledge of himself and the world around him.” - Dylan Thomas

Have you ever read a great book like that? Have you ever been involved in a story that’s so compelling it begins to breathe a life of its own. And it possesses you. Long after you’ve finished the story, you’ll remember it.The characters became so real, you wanted them to remain in your life. Instead you were left with a hollow void until you found another book. But that one didn’t capture your soul, so you tossed it aside and searched for another one. There’s always that hope the author will write a sequel so that all those characters live again.

I had that experience with the early writings of Jude Deveraux when she created the Montgomery clan. I’d finish one story and could hardly wait to read about another Montgomery. Jude made me laugh out loud with their antics. As an author, her words jumped out and stirred my emotions. I fell in love with all of her characters.

There’s always a fire in my own soul as my fingers touch the keyboard. I want to believe I’m creating something as magical and as profound as some of the books I’ve read in my lifetime. I tell myself, even if it’s only one page; one page that my readers will find inspirational and unforgettable, I’ll be happy. But I’m deluding myself. One page isn’t good enough.

The truth is, the story I created and spent sleepless nights over wasn’t perfect. My heart was in the right place, but the words staring back at me on paper were silent. I couldn’t hear them.

The initial creation of the plot may have come easily but having my character come to life took a lot longer. I had to become the heroine, feel her pain, walk with her through her nightmares and fall in-love with the man she was afraid to trust. I had to see her visions and understand how she believed she was going insane. I had to feel the world I created was as real as my own.

All writers will strive for the same perfection.  But soon you’ll  recognize that your passion for writing isn’t enough. There won’t be just one draft or even 5. You’ll lose count. Then, you’ll feel like tearing them all up and start over again. Learn this lesson now. It will never be perfect in your own eyes. If you’re lucky enough to find a publisher, you can lose what little confidence you had in the story when you see all the comments and changes. Especially if there’s more red than black on the page. I felt like a child when the publisher held my hand and walked me through it. Then I  became an adult again.

And the good news is that no matter how many times you’ll feel insecure, you’ll never stop writing. You couldn’t even if you tried.  It’s what makes us a special breed. No matter how many rejections, you’ll keep at it until one magical day, you’ll see your book in print. I’m waiting for that myself.

Until next time, Stay in the Write Zone.

 

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